It is true that fashion designers making something new every day. Some people believe fashion contributes positively towards the society and individuals, while others do not. This essay examines both sides of the argument before draw a conclusion.
To begin with, some arguments from people who support the fashion are really make sense. First of all, new dresses and other cosmetic items enhance the confidence in people especially in youngsters, when they wear it. This confidence help them to show a positive approach towards their work. For example, a well dressed employee in a multi national...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...ople who support the fashion are really make sense. First of all, new dresses and ot...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lti national company will feel confident ,when he she chair meeting with chair per...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chairs'.
Suggestion: chairs
...ompany will feel confident ,when he she chair meeting with chair person of the compan...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the company. Another important reason is , nowadays psychologists opined that wear...
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Line 3, column 654, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'attitude'?
Suggestion: attitude
...ed clothes gradually pick up a positive attitudes towards the lie. Thus, the chances for ...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...money on new fashioned items rather give this money for charitable works. Secondl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, first of all, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25632911392 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51321973233 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.384769539078 1040% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7897685055 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7058823529 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296509935618 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105664154771 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690037402118 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204795986997 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405384670905 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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