It is often argued that, in twenty first century the number of people who reading news in gadgets is increasing, however some people says newspapers will continue as a major source of news and information for the majority of people. I completely agree with this opinion and think news paper still play a pivotal role in the society because of various reasons
First of all, newspapers became a habit of the people mainly elderly, so they are not interested in reading news on gadgets.Some people especially elders reading newspapers everyday morning and this habit is now part of their routines. Thus, it is not that easy a transition from newspaper to gadgets. For example, my father has a habit of reading newspaper soon after he wakes up everyday morning. Now, although he has a smart phone, he prefer to read newspaper. There are many people in our society like my father. Hence, it is sure that newspapers will remain as a major source of news and information because it is a habit for the people.
Moreover, newspaper is cheap and easy to access and even poor people can afford it comparing to the gadgets. Many poor people around the globe do not have a smart phone or computer, which are too costly for them. So the only option before them in order to acquire knowledge and news is newspapers. For example, in my home town newspaper cost only 5 Indian rupees and this price is acceptable for even the poorest man in our city. Finally, to read news on gadgets people need a stable a continuous internet connection, which is still a dream for people in some parts of the world. For instance, some African countries still struggling for a continuous electricity connection. Hence, reading news on gadgets is absolutely impossible for people in that part of the world and their only way to getting news and information is newspapers.
To conclude, I strongly believe newspaper continue as a major source of information for people around the globe because its cheaper, easy accessible and above all it is a habit of some people habit for the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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It is often argued that, in twenty first...
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...the society because of various reasons First of all, newspapers became a habit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77591036415 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62090887892 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.3838494629 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367438181929 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131217192293 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100708389615 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248986687853 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059380079585 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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