It is true that people nowadays lacking many skills, which people in the past had. This essay checks the possible reasons for this trend. And I too depend on service centers to do small repair works, which I can do alone.
To begin with, in the past people did small repair works in their houses by themselves. However, nowadays people do not do these small works and they are doing it with the local shops this is happening mainly due to two reasons. First of all, nowadays people busier than the people in the past. They have a lot of responsibilities in the workplace as well as at the home. The relentless work schedule makes them abstain from the skilled jobs, which our ancient generation did. For example, an engineer who does work from morning 6 am to 6 pm does not have enough time to do his household repair works. Another important reason is people became addicted to laziness and sedentary lifestyle. The youngsters nowadays more interested in social networking sites and TV programs. They never have the time and interest to do small household repairing works.
I think, I too affected with this social stigma. Being a member of the modern society I am also not interested in taking the initiative of doing small skilled works in my house. I usually call a technician in the nearest workshop to get things done. This is mainly because I work 12 hours per day and hardly get any time to look after the repair works in my house. Secondly, being a member of the modern society I am experienced in my own profession only, the other small but skilled jobs I never tried.
To conclude, the current generation not interested in taking up the small and skilled jobs in the household due to above-mentioned reasons and I personally affected negatively with this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, as well as, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68051118211 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57583686223 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517571884984 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1917586452 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3888888889 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266538227936 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822523875164 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547375773193 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162434527794 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063733609591 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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