The number of obese people increasing day by day. However, controlling the number of obese patients thorough various programs is not yet successfully implemented. This essay explains some solutions for this problem.
The first and foremost reason for obesity is sedentary lifestyle. sedentary life style in obese people can change thorough sports and exercises. Generally obese people very unlikely engage in sporting activities. Nevertheless, this attitude can be changed with proper counselling . The counselor should explain about the dangerous diseases obesity brings, along with the pictures and videos . This will be effective rather than counselling speeches because they can easily understand the problems that obese people faces from videos. For example, children do not like advise from counselors but showing them these type of videos will change their mind. And they can understand that they will also face the same problems in future unless they engage in sports and exercises now.
Another solution is, change in eating habits. The mushrooming of fast food centers played a pivotal role in increasing the number of obese people. SO governments have to impose heavy tax on fast foods. Consequently, the consumption of junk food will come down due to increase in cost. Besides, food inspectors in each town should check each food packet in order to identify its contents. It is noticed recently by food inspectors in India that a product of famous multinational food company is filled with obesity causing contents in dangerous levels. Finally, private cars make people lazy as it provides lot of comfort and privacy. so private car tax should increase so that people will use bicycles for commuting which keep them healthy .
To conclude, obesity is a world wide threat but it can be controlled easily with the above mentioned solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33788395904 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66387652304 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6469192813 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212577537608 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649410736146 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561562421964 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134749924003 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499294634005 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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