You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
As we can see, the above line graph describes about average passengers using subway stations in London on a 1-hour basis. The units are measured in numbers.
In general, from line graph number of passengers using underground station roses in early morning as well as in peak hours. It fluctuates between mid-noon and night times.
Looking at the graph, number of passengers using underground stations are doubled, in the time of 8 am and 6 pm (100-200). Meanwhile, it rapidly declines after 2 hours in morning as well as peak hours (200-100). Finally, it alters after 10 am to 4 pm about 80 difference per hour and we can see same in the middle of 8 pm to 10 pm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, well, while, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 545.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60756112105 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 156.6 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3247326203 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8571428571 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125733973485 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588237956902 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644983090503 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933031789899 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139256863346 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.