You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the job interview concerning the nurse position in the Main Hospital that I passed on October 10. I would like to commence my internship on November 15, as agreed. However, I will not be able to present myself on that date.

As you can see in my job application interview, I estimated one month in order to complete my studies and activities at my current job and start working in the hospital’s nursery. Unfortunately, I got terribly sick during the past days. Consequently, I could not sort out the last tasks and will need another week for a complete recovery. I already provide a copy of a letter from my doctor informing that I had to undergo medical treatments during that week.

However, I can do additional hours by the following week to retrieve my working days. I feel responsible for the pressure my delayed commence may have created at the Main Hospital.

I sincerely apologise for the inconvenience and hope this will not affect our work collaboration. I look forward to hearing from you for any further information.

Yours faithfully,

Haris Papadopoulos

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the job inte...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will not affect our work collaboration. I look forward to hearing from you for an...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rther information. Yours faithfully, Haris Papadopoulos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, look, may, so, i feel, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9067357513 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03934485 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9965276271 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175932467486 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056690358342 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048678871408 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853118582966 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619662149296 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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