You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
To whom it may concern,
My name is Haris Papadopoulos and I am writing regarding an arrangement in order to spend the following weekend at your hotel. I would like to have some further information concerning the hotel's facilities.
First and foremost, I will be arriving with a group of five people (myself included) on the 6th of June, and leaving on the 9th of June, probably in the afternoon. I am looking to book a triple room and a double one with attached bathrooms for more privacy and convenience.
Furthermore, I would love to have both the rooms with a seaside view. Additionally, I would also appreciate if you can provide me a list of activities nearby the hotel with the precise cost for each of them. Moreover, I would like to book a personal guide since the city has plenty of historical sites and museums.
You could send me proof information via email or fax no later than the 2nd of July with the total cost of the staying period. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Haris Papadopoulos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77875165824 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2473667818 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251269789166 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825806414283 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450112956345 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113191490658 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758792691151 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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