After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.In your letter:•Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing•Express your appreci

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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Mr. Adam,
I hope this letter will find you in best of health. You might be confused while reading this letter as you do not know me but I do not have words to say thank you for what you did during the time I was hospitalized.
Let me introduce myself to make you comfortable as well, I am Sam the guy who you took to hospital after I met an accident on martin street last week. It was my luck that I was found by you while I was comatose and was not able to move even. You showed courage and took me to hospital which saved my life and I do not have works to express my gratitude for your gesture of kindness.
By the grace of God, I am fully recovered now and have been moved back to my place. I got your contact information from the hospital as really wanted to express my appreciativeness for your support and kindness. This makes me believe on humanity stronger than before. I request you to join me and my family on a dinner during the weekend and accept my humble request as this will make us pleased to host my savior. You can find my address on the back of envelope and I am hopeful to hear back in a positively manner.
Yours sincerely,
Sam Andlar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 497, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('positively') instead an adjective, or a noun ('manner') instead of another adjective.
...velope and I am hopeful to hear back in a positively manner. Yours sincerely, Sam Andlar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12719298246 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37625005576 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.968307602 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300598159777 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1114071967 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821921876278 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214291348422 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766134311251 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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