Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the recent program, named as SAP in business management, which is being offered by your college. I know that the prior knowledge about the program is mandatory for meeting the eligibility criteria for enrolling into this course. Unfortunately, I don't have any prerequisite education but I do have the experience of running this program at my office from last two years.
After having some practical experience, I do believe that if given opportunity to be enrolled into this course, I will pass the annual examination with flying colors. Actually my employer is very supportive in terms of individual capacity building and encourage us to take part time courses to enhance our knowledge into required areas of work.
I hope that your college have some exception for the working class of the society. I also read on the notice board that college offer courses designed with specific requirements on request if demanded in advance by the students.Keeping that in mind, I would very grateful to you if you would allow me to enroll into this course.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind Regards,
Ahmed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ling into this course. Unfortunately, I dont have any prerequisite education but I d...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...acity building and encourage us to take part time courses to enhance our knowledge into r...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Keeping
... if demanded in advance by the students.Keeping that in mind, I would very grateful to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08717948718 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81103302015 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661538461538 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3784510623 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210303677988 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078151179569 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502156588041 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126685076303 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466309006799 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.