Dear Karen,
I am very happy that you contacted me after such a long time. It's a good news to hear from you that your son is coming to my country. I am writing this letter with extreme regrets that unfortunately the day your son lands into my country, i will be not available at that time as i have scheduled official meeting in Singapore by my employer. However I will make sure that your son do not have any problems within his stay period.
The house is under revamping and restructuring shape because of this. I am sorry to say that I can not accommodate your son in my house but i can manage to arrange his stay at one of my friends house. His house is just across the road from my place and it's also well maintained and spacious. I hope your son will enjoy his stay as he will also have the company with my friends family. I already informed him about his arrival details they will pick him up from the airport.
For making your son stay more mobile. i will handover my car keys to my friends family he can take it from them and ride it when ever and where ever he wants to go. Other than that if he needs any kind of support my friends family would happy to assist him. You do not need to worry as he is just like my son and he will be in safe hands.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Nasir Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ou contacted me after such a long time. Its a good news to hear from you that your ...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...ontacted me after such a long time. Its a good news to hear from you that your son is comin...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the day your son lands into my country, i will be not available at that time as i...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...al meeting in Singapore by my employer. However I will make sure that your son do not h...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ot accommodate your son in my house but i can manage to arrange his stay at one o...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... For making your son stay more mobile. i will handover my car keys to my friends...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... For making your son stay more mobile. i will handover my car keys to my friends...
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Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Yours faithfully, Nasir Khan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 32.9175257732 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18007662835 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17201845214 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.074008868 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336075657294 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126456886252 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893265467177 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184980554509 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799341238603 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.