Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to the recent advertisement posted on Times Magazine last Saturday. I believe that job for taking care of your baby within the mentioned time period would directly suitable for me as i am the right fit and had past experience of child care center in Early Childhood Education Institute in Sydney. Moreover, I am also starting my course here in university for a year so that is a suitable condition for me as i can also have the accommodation covered by you.
I have two hours lecture in a week in morning so my evenings are free and would definitely find some job for work. The reason why you should hire me is because of my past experience and some of the certification that were adding my credentials of baby sitting.
Apart from my work i also appreciate to spend my free time within the park at toddlers play area. where i meet different families and guide parents the advanced parenting tactics to improve their children's development mentally and physically. This gives me a sense of satisfaction that i am playing an important role in community development.
I hope you would be interested to meet me in person to discuss my success stories in terms of early childhood education.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Ibrahim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eriod would directly suitable for me as i am the right fit and had past experienc...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...le for me as i am the right fit and had past experience of child care center in Early Childhood...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... that is a suitable condition for me as i can also have the accommodation covered...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...work. The reason why you should hire me is because of my past experience and some of the c...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...why you should hire me is because of my past experience and some of the certification that were...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...me is because of my past experience and some of the certification that were adding my crede...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate spending'.
Suggestion: appreciate spending
... sitting. Apart from my work i also appreciate to spend my free time within the park at toddler...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
... within the park at toddlers play area. where i meet different families and guide par...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n the park at toddlers play area. where i meet different families and guide paren...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s gives me a sense of satisfaction that i am playing an important role in communi...
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Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you soon. Yours Sincerely, Ibrahim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86842105263 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83240982179 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.539320183 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222705250276 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770044425276 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403410847066 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10648484886 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565467570094 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.