Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about the computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer, in your letter explain
Why you are writing?
Describe your circumstances?
Ask if a special exception can be made for you, so you can enroll in the course?
Dear sir,
My name is Navjot Kaur, and I have just completed my senior secondary education from Meritorious School Bathinda. I am writing to request you that if it is possible please give me enrollment in a computer course.
Even though I did not study any kind of basic course in computing, I have great passion towards using computers. Moreover,I read a news in newspaper that a new batch of computer course is going to start; however, I am I am not eligible for that course even I am still interested to do the course.
Actually,I request you if you can do something for me to enroll me in the computer course, I will be grateful for you. Also, you can take extra charges from me, and I'm ready to pay for that but please try to enroll me in that course.
I hope that you will definitely do something for me. I will be very thankful for you.
Yours faithfully,
Navjot Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...assion towards using computers. Moreover,I read a news in newspaper that a new bat...
^^
Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...owards using computers. Moreover,I read a news in newspaper that a new batch of comput...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'I am'.
Suggestion: I am
...uter course is going to start; however, I am I am not eligible for that course even I am ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...interested to do the course. Actually,I request you if you can do something for...
^^
Line 6, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...you can take extra charges from me, and Im ready to pay for that but please try to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45398773006 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56541501707 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7594316095 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32710505845 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126713914586 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653861777751 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190815238932 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164983178364 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.