you are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter Explain why you are writing. Describe what went wrong with the meal and the service. Suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant.
Dear sir,
My name is navjot Kaur, and I am a member of an organisation, which regularly conducts its meetings in your restaurant. I am writing to inform you about the meal that we had on 21st june 2021 that was not satisfactory for me and members of the organisation.
Actually me and other members of organisation meet in your restaurant to discuss about serious matters of our work. We ordered 4 paneer pizzas, unfortunately we got only two of them. When we asked to the waiter, he just listen us but not gave proper answer. Anyway we tried to manage with two pizzas; however, pizzas were not fresh as well as a smell was unpleasant for us.
As we are your regular customers, it is my duty to inform you about my dissatisfaction with the meal which were provided in your restaurant. Also, I believe that you will definitely take some actions about that happening. I hope you will ensure that it may not happen again.
I will be your thankful if you do something about my complaint.
Yours faithfully,
Navjot Kaur.
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| 2021-07-28 | Lovely Brar | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, however, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6393442623 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78126509275 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8400948198 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258576620022 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935867072015 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684631014113 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158229358618 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697569346786 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.