Average percentages of sodium, satuated fats, added sugar in typical meals in the USA
The graph give information about the average proportion of three types of nutrient namely soidium, satuated fats, added sugar, which can be unhealthy if consume too much, in typial meals in USA
As can be seen, Americans eat less sodium, saturated fats and sugar during their breakfast but they consume a large proportion of them while they eat their lunch and dinner. The snacks also contain these nutrients in plenty.
Looking at the details, the sodium comsumed in breakfast took a large slice in chart, accounting for 43%, while 29% of it while having lunch. In contrast, the breakfast and snacks contain 14% of sodium, which was an equal proportion. The second chart represents the percentages of satuatated fats in meals. Dinner contain the highest ratio of satuated fats ( 37%). By eating lunch, the average american consume 26% of satuated fats, followed by snacks with 21% and breakfast with 16%. The last pie chart illustrates the proportion of added sugar. Snacks contributes to a comsumption of 42% of added sugar. A typical dinner includes 23% of sugar while lunch and breakfats contain 19% and 16% respectively.
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Suggestion: contains
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05913978495 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5912026429 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.1488214011 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 94.1 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332046752232 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116097683712 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733393921284 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202246846545 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813347284419 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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