birthday
Dear Mr. Wong,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for the immaculate service and organising the unforgettable 90th birthday of my grandfather. The event was on 21st of February and it was in the main ballroom. There were over 100 guests, mainly being elderly friends of my grandfather and a few younger family members.
I really appreciate the special attention given to the guests. The ballroom was conveniently accessible from the parking lot. Some of the guests that used wheelchairs were able to join with comfort thanks to the ramps located at the entrance. Additionally, the theme of the party was well thought of and comfortable seats made it relaxing for the guests to enjoy their time. The highlight of the night was the food and people enjoyed it a lot.
Furthermore, I would like to thank your team for their utmost care, especially “Lily” who went out of the way and helped in making this event memorable.
I am now your loyal customer and I will surely recommend your hotel to my friends as well.
Yours sincerely,
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- birthday 11
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 89
- birthday 11
- you organised a 90th birthday party 67
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...iently accessible from the parking lot. Some of the guests that used wheelchairs were able ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83122223527 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3049164296 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0491565558209 0.216113520407 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0139477759477 0.0766984524023 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441067402886 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258074201904 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446997629821 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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