A builder has recently completed some renovation at your house but you are not satisfied with his work. Write a letter to him. In your letter,
-Tell him what work has not been completed properly.
-Tell him what you want him to do.
-Suggest some times when you will be available at home.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my sheer dissatisfaction with the renovation work performed by your team in my house.
As per our signed contract, you were supposed to whitewash and paint all the walls of my house. Unfortunately, you failed to accomplish your commitment. Yesterday I checked that the paint of my bedroom wall started peeling off due to dampening.
As it is just three days since you completed your work, I request you to visit my house again and repaint these damaged walls. Moreover, you are already paid for these services, so I am not liable to pay any other amount.
Due to some official work, I will be travelling to New Delhi this week. I would appreciate it if could come next week for fixing all the said issues. Please call me at +9155848447757575 if you have any doubt regarding my complaint.
I am hoping to hear a positive response from your end.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your end. Yours sincerely, John Smith
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70552147239 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81850933673 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1581609006 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7272727273 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221110338902 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785240291635 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610684173861 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10981979606 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488793495524 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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