The chart below shows the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000.
The two pie charts depict the proportion of contribution by industrial sectors towards the Indian and Turkish economy in 2000.
Overall, it can be manifested that, in India construction contribute the least to the economy and agriculture was the most significant sector. Whereas, in Turkey finance , business and other sector contribute the lowest amount in economy where health care and education contribute highest amount of economy.
Firstly, in India agriculture sector contribute 24% of them towards the Indian economy in 2000 which was the highest while, construction contribute medley 3% to the India's economy. Also the government sector contribute the half amount of the agriculture sector in to the Indian economy. Whereas, healthcare and education sector and leisure and hospitality sector share the same (17%) to the country's economy. In addition to this, manufacturing sector gives 8% and finance,business and other sector contribute 3% less of it to the economy. Trade, utilities and transportation sector share 14% of them to the economy.
Secondly, agriculture and leisure and hospitality sector shares the same amount (14%)of the money to the Turkey's economy. While, construction contribute 10% and 1% less than of it was shared by government to the economy. Finance business and other sector contribute 8 % to the economy where double amount of it was shared by trade,utiltes and transportation. However, healthcare and education sector contribute 17% of money to the Turkish economy where 14% amount was contributed by leisure and hospitality department. Share of manufacturing department and trade utilities and transportation department was 12% for the former one and 16% for the later one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 3.85567010309 519% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 937.175257732 155% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51711026616 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14730102437 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399239543726 0.622605031667 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 290.88556701 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.9505354482 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321293641348 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145858008713 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893670444167 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251638294922 0.12726935374 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664923650521 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 70.7449484536 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 7.45979381443 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 8.71597938144 169% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.