The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050

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The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050

The charts compare about the generation of community in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of ages above 60 years old in Yemen is predicted rising, while in Italy's percentage in projection will fall.
In Yemen, in 2000, the proportion of population is dominated by teenagers and adult and the percentage of mature people will rise about 11% in 2050, while children 's percentage will fall approximately 13%. The amount of older society is shown stable in from first year until the year of predicted.
In the first period, in 2000, in Italy, the percentage of adult dominated and got the highest percentage, but it is predicted falling about 15% in 2050, while the amount of older generation will be predicted double in last year. The percentage of stable in the older generation is shown in Yemen's chart, but the children's percentage is illustrated by Italy.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86624203822 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74425478369 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 127.690721649 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503184713376 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1489448211 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21844688084 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130225367048 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111890129566 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172470029766 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104461522168 0.0580467560999 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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