The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari

Given are two figures regarding the foreign languages that British students of a university were able to speak by 2000 and 2010.
It is clear from the pie charts that with 30% and 35% of the Brit students speaking Spanish by 2000 and 2010 respectively, the named language was the most popular second language. By 2000 one of every five students was able to talk only his or her first language, in contrast, the rate halved a decade later. Being multilingual with two foreign languages increased and reached 15%, by a fifty percent rise during ten years.
French is the sole language of figures that became less popular. The rate of Brit students who talk french was 15% firstly, although it declined significantly and reached 10% by 2010. Remaining constant, one out of ten British students could speak German during the period in question. Though other languages have not underlined the figures,15% of students were bilingual with them in 2000. The rate was a fifth in 2010.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85628742515 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53750949288 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7402057194 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262147118699 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112735898063 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798478048599 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215606516052 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648035132938 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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