A close friend is coming to visit you. He has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and surrounding area
Write a letter to your friend, in your letter:
Ask for more details about your friend's plan:
suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown
Tell your friend about food and drinks should try.
Dear prabh,
I am very excited to find your letter and glad to know that you and family are doing well. I am eagerly waiting for your visit to my home town. it been so long I haven't take an off from work. it is going to be more excited as I have long weekend so we can plan to visit different place near by my town. let me till how long you will going to stay with me. I have so many things in my list which we going to do.
Firstly, The day you arrive I will come to pick you from station, afterward we go for lunch in one of famous sea food restaurant of our town.On the next day we will visit a place chail near solan. Its a half an hour travel from my place . There we can see zoo, famous chail palace, Heritage gurdwara and a highest asian cricket ground.
secondly, I know you are keen of having good variety of food especially noodles. Shimla has good street food market where you can enjoy authentic food too.
Look forward to hear from you as early as possible.
Love
Preeti
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-06-19 | singhpreeti | 73 | view |
| 2018-08-11 | sai.varadula | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear prabh, I am very excited to find your letter an...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...waiting for your visit to my home town. it been so long I havent take an off from ...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...isit to my home town. it been so long I havent take an off from work. it is going to b...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...so long I havent take an off from work. it is going to be more excited as I have l...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'weekended'.
Suggestion: weekended
...going to be more excited as I have long weekend so we can plan to visit different place...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...so we can plan to visit different place near by my town. let me till how long you will...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
... visit different place near by my town. let me till how long you will going to sta...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erent place near by my town. let me till how long you will going to stay with me....
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...my town. let me till how long you will going to stay with me. I have so many things ...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... famous sea food restaurant of our town.On the next day we will visit a place chai...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...we will visit a place chail near solan. Its a half an hour travel from my place . T...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Its a half an hour travel from my place . There we can see zoo, famous chail pala...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ous chail palace, Heritage gurdwara and a highest asian cricket ground. secon...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...and a highest asian cricket ground. secondly, I know you are keen of having good var...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...oy authentic food too. Look forward to hear from you as early as possible. Love...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12820512821 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97302587718 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0561771556 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193448520833 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636476947474 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677564081876 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971400672174 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614687378029 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.