A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague.
In your letter, you should say:
• what the presentation was about,
• why the presentation was important
• how the book helped you.
Dear Ram,
Hope this letter finds you well. If you remember in my last letter I had mentioned that I was looking for new apartment as my current apartment lease was due to expire this month. Happy to inform you that I have found a well-furnished studio apartment, and I will be moving in my new apartment by end of this month.
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for gifting me the book “7 Habits of Highly Effective People” by Stephen Covey. Last week, I had a presentation to make on “How to make changes in your Attitude”. The central idea on making this presentation was how not to build perception and make small changes in your attitude which will help in leading a life stress free. This presentation was very important to me, as this year as part of HR initiatives, my team is promoting harmony in relationship and leading a stress free life.
This book has helped me not only professionally but also personally. It helped me to understand the 7 habits that are important in life, and how implementing the habits will help me to change my perception, attitude and lead a stress free life. Since, I had read the book, it helped me to present the idea to the management and employees of the company. I would also like to share, that I received appreciation emails, calls and messages from many employees post the presentation.
Once again, I would like to thank you. I look forward to hearing from you.
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development To what extent do you support this development 91
- You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:•describe what the course is•explain how it will benefit to the company•give suitable time schedule. 89
- Many sports players advertise sports-related products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 73
- Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Some think that teenagers should follow older people s rules Others thinks that it is natural for them to challenge what older people say Discuss both views and give your opinion 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. I look forward to hearing from you.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65758754864 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87463064409 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8392277945 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0769230769 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285061534705 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105218229388 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444399474738 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163671043685 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034406575287 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.