The company you work for is opening a new branch in another country and you would
like to work there. Write a letter to your manager and say
- why are you suitable to work in that country
what job you would like to take in the new office
-ask about the work to be done in the new branch
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have recently got news about opening of new office in New York, and I am writing this letter to request you to allow me to work there. The reason why I am suitable for this is I have valid work permit to work in the United States of America which would certainly reduce the time of paper work to get approval from the government. Moreover, I am aware about regulations and mode of operations of this country based on the previous experience.
I would be grateful if the role of an office administrator could be assigned to me because I have persuaded master degree in management. In addition, I am also willing to take additional responsibility of Regulatory officer as mandatory certificate and license of it were awarded by me to work in the USA.
Apart from this, kindly share if necessary support is expected from the current office for the successful opening of overseas branch because of easy availability of certain professionals working in the same sector are known by me.
Hope you would consider my request and thanking you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Nirav Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etter to request you to allow me to work there. The reason why I am suitable for ...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ca which would certainly reduce the time of paper work to get approval from the g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85263157895 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84405391286 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3939099592 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369126778704 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137314741764 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927542472814 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197966370945 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10299299809 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.