The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing cement, and the second diagram gives information about how concrete is made.
As can be seen from the production of cement, there are totally five steps, beginning with the input of raw materials and ending with packaging finished products. Producing concrete requires four materials mixed together.
The first stage of production of cement is that limestone and clay are placed in a crusher to manufacture a powder. This power goes through a rotating heater after being mixed. After that, the heated mixture is put into a grinder to form a cement. Finally, the cement is packaged in large bags.
After the cement is bagged and delivered to building sites, these bags are used to produce concrete. There is a formula to get the best concrete for constructive aims. The concrete consists of 10% water, 15% cement, 25% sand and a remaining half of gravel, which pours into the concrete mixer. Then, this machine rotates to mix four materials as the completing concrete.
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 78
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we needmusic? Is the traditional music of a country more important than theInternational music that is heard everywhere nowadays 61
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared 44
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the cement is packaged in large bags. After the cement is bagged and delivered...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10588235294 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62331837716 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8569241328 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315801261979 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103379135209 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748818029875 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175695852972 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650712548891 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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