Dear Samir,
I am writing this letter to apply for a job in your Delhi restaurant as suggested by you.
I was travelling from London to Delhi on June 12, just 3 days ago, via Indian airlines on which I met you sitting besides me. During our journey, we talked about many things including an opportunity that you offered me to work in one of your food chain restaurants business. I think, I am having a sound knowledge in people management and possesses 5 years of experience as a manager in CCD cafe.
I would like to apply for a shift manager position at your Delhi outlet which seems a perfect match for me. I can work long hours as per the restaurant's busy schedule and also can be available on holidays and weekends. I have been dealing with the staff since last 5 years and my skills at people management will help increase customer satisfaction overall.
I am attaching my latest CV herewith and is available for an interview any time between 10 am and 7 pm.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John Cena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sound knowledge'.
Suggestion: sound knowledge
...taurants business. I think, I am having a sound knowledge in people management and possesses 5 ye...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...let which seems a perfect match for me. I can work long hours as per the restaura...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... be available on holidays and weekends. I have been dealing with the staff since ...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rease customer satisfaction overall. I am attaching my latest CV herewith and ...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iew any time between 10 am and 7 pm. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61790658791 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689473684211 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2345269877 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148302238369 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614043322941 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756193178095 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955107738285 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827787757078 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.