In many major cities, population is increasing due to urbanization. People from small towns migrate to metro cities for better education, wealth and prosperity. As a result, there is a shortage of homeland at the city centre. Some people believe that new homes should be built at the countryside, while others argue that it should not be diluted by plethora of houses. I will discuss advantages and disadvantages of both and share my opinion on it in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, building homes at various places have become dime necessity to accommodate people's needs. Everyone in this world desires to have his/her own house. Since it is difficult to construct habitats in a city due to congestion, developers prefer to build them near countryside. It also offers houses at much lower costs due to remote locations. However, it is threatening to occupy countryside which is a place for nature and animals.
On the other hand, people who contend this development oppose this in order to protect wild life and natural resources. First and foremost, building homes at countryside causes a disturbance to wild animals as residents will throw garbage, spit any where, and may hunt animals for food. Secondly, construction requires land and water which will affect water resources like lakes and rivers. For example, recently scientists found that there are more extinct animal species than a decade ago due to human interference. Hence, I strongly agree that government should not grant permission to build new homes at countryside and find alternate solutions to accommodate requirements.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that building should be constructed eminently at the city area and I firmly deny use of countryside for habitats. Instead, people should use the cognizance of the fact that such development will lead concerns to society itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26072607261 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90452294299 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7113654692 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251401592121 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662863438687 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592589640547 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141525407776 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373965650043 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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