During A Recent Plane Journey, You Sat Next To A Businessman Who Owns A Chain Of Restaurants
Dear Sir,
My name is Sreenivasan Murugappan and working as a Manager in Adyar Restaurant. Last week I met you in Indian Airways plane going towards Bangalore to Chennai. I got an opportunity to discuss with you on south Indian chettinad food, inter-continental cuisine and Arab style of cooking. I hope you would have recognized me. I’m writing this letter to apply for a suitable job in your chain of restaurants as per your suggestions.
I have 10 years of experience in hotel management, started as receptionist and promoted as floor supervisor, guest trip planner and last year due to excellence in work promoted as branch manager. I’m looking for a managerial role because of my earlier achievements in this industry. I will be the right candidate for this job because of my hands-on experience in various department in food and hospitality domain. Additionally, this job perfectly suit my profile for instance my current restaurant generating a pretty decent and became number one restaurant in financial turnover because of my leadership and customer relationship skills.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sreenivasan.M
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...soon. Yours faithfully, Sreenivasan.M
^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon. Yours faithfully, Sreenivasan.M
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37837837838 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2126302971 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0993001035 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927579197504 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035655367962 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035339855262 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718124477078 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403444188879 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.