During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Dear Mr Smith,
My name is Sunil and we met last week on a Spice-Jet flight going from Hyderabad to Delhi. I was a co-passenger sitting on aisle seat next to you. During our conversation, we had a brief discussion about my work experience and you suggested a possible job opening in one of your restaurants.
I am writing regarding the same opportunity for a senior accountant place at one of your restaurant. Currently, I am working as a senior accountant at Trident hotel. I have a master's degree in commerce and a diploma in hospitality industry. I am looking for a job change in the same accounting domain, where I can manage a single entity account or the entire accounting portfolio for all your restaurants.
I believe this position is an exact match of my skill sets as I have more than ten years of relevant experience in accounting and hospitality domains. I would like to request if you could please go through my profile and let me know your thoughts at your earliest convenience.
Thank you so much for time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours sincerely,
Sunil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ortfolio for all your restaurants. I believe this position is an exact match...
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Line 13, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in accounting and hospitality domains. I would like to request if you could plea...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80102040816 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9911016164 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7024089123 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165554616381 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624539876668 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842591462149 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113354938234 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793715034038 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.