During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman.
In your letter,
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr Powell,
I am Karunakaran who met you while you were resting in the lounge at the Chennai Domestic airport on last Saturday. We sat next to one another and discussed your business and the potential openings that you have at one of your chain of restaurants. I am writing this letter to express my interest in working for you.
You have mentioned that you are about to open a branch in Chennai and your trip was to finalize the location. I am keen on applying for the restaurant manager position if it is not filled yet. I am flair and passionate about hospitality and hotel management, which pursued me to do a post-graduate degree in Hotel Management. I possess an extensive history of experience as a restaurant manager, worked with various international chain of restaurants, and ran their branches very well. My previous employers have endorsed my ability and attitude at my LinkedIn page that you can refer to by accessing the below link.
I would be happy to discuss further my qualification and reward. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Karunakaran Meenakshi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st-graduate degree in Hotel Management. I possess an extensive history of experie...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d reward. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Karunakaran Meenakshi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94507976021 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664893617021 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4036769238 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255192658676 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928702283104 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702034407627 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123657837344 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106889705889 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.