During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talk to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your Letter
• Remind him when and where you met
• Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Pramod,
This is Shyam and I hope you are doing great. With reference to our conversation during the recent flight journey, I am writing this letter to take forward our relation by detailing a bit about my interests and future aspirations.
I remember that you travel to multiple places on a regular basis so it might be hard to recollect me. We met on an Indigo flight that took off from Hyderabad at 6:30 AM on 30th November 2020 and headed towards New Delhi. While we were enjoying our coffee served by the air hostess, we happened to exchange our information regarding our professional interests. I must admit that was an eye-opening discussion where you spoke about importance of networks in today's world.
Even after achieving such a stature in society being the owner of Chutneys chain of restaurants, I found you to be a humble person and it was very kind of you to pass me information about the job openings at your Hyderabad location. I am very keen for the Senior Manager role whose responsibilities include supervising and managing the reputation of the restaurant in local community.
Let me explain why I think I could be a great fit for this role. I hold a Masters degree in hospitality that landed me in a job where I got a chance to prove myself by utilising the opportunities. Although the role of Assistant Manager in the initial stages of the career felt challenging, I got a chance to enhance my skillsets that helped me excel into greater positions at the Swagat Restaurant. I am currently working with them as a Manager for more than 3 years. Also, I am looking for more challenging roles that can hone
my competencies. With this academic background and experience, I think I would be a great asset to your business.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours Sincerely
Shyam
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| 2020-12-14 | shyamforever | 73 | view |
| 2020-12-14 | shyamforever | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, while, i think, kind of, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 937.175257732 161% => OK
No of words: 316.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77215189873 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92325596084 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604430379747 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 290.88556701 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0736230948 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164577105952 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535052656865 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539961885276 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990629222329 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631605355285 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 41.2886597938 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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