During recent plane journey you set next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurant.
Write a letter to this businessman in your letter,
- Remind him when and where you meet.
- Tell him what kind of job you are interested in.
- Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir,
Have you remembered the flight journey where we met each other? We have delightful conversation about your business. I am writing this letter to enquire about possible vacancy of Restaurant manager in your restaurant.
I was sit next to you and it was long conversation with you on board. You offered me your business card of restaurant. You have discussed me that there are plenty of restaurants in the major cities of the country. You also suggested me to do job in one of your restaurant.
You might be surprised to know that my area of interest is in restaurant industries which are growing faster nowadays. Moreover, I have more than three years of experience as an assistant manager in well-known restaurant. In addition to this, I have two years of experience as a customer service representative in restaurant. Therefore, I believe that I could easily fit in your company.
It would be very grateful for me if you could give me position of assistant manager in one of your restaurant. I could see my bright future in your company. I am looking forward to hear from you
Thanks,
Yours Truly,
Nisharg Chauhan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sat'.
Suggestion: sat
...nt manager in your restaurant. I was sit next to you and it was long conversatio...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nts in the major cities of the country. You also suggested me to do job in one of y...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to do job in one of your restaurant. You might be surprised to know that my area...
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Line 6, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat I could easily fit in your company. It would be very grateful for me if you ...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...e in your company. I am looking forward to hear from you Thanks, Yours Truly, Nis...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. I am looking forward to hear from you Thanks, Yours Truly, Nisharg Chauhan. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91255867368 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8572497859 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.7857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301974426579 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11207345221 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757701030582 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189728772996 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06958160319 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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