Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desserts or The Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
The tourism industries are growing faster with current globalization. People can travel at any corner of world with the help of fastest communication system. Nowadays people prefer to travel at extremely adventurous places such as the Sahara deserts or the Antarctica where the conditions are very difficult. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks for tourist who visits frequently to these places.
First of all, some people are so crazy to travel at isolated places which are far away from the home rather than travelling at common tourist places. They find some good benefits from there. For instance, visiting at Antarctica which is the 7th continent of the world has great features like peaceful environment, rich wildlife, stimulating history and majestic landscapes. The journey of Antarctica will take us so far away from home as we will be ever! Similarly, the Sahara desert is the largest desert in the world and very popular for desert safari. The journey of Sahara deserts has totally opposite weather condition from Antarctica and it is located at South Pole of earth. The desert has greatest wildlife sanctuary and tourist can find so many species of animal and birds.
On the other side, there may be some drawbacks over the above advantages. It is difficult to travel in such extreme weather especially for those who are from tropical region as there are so hot weather in dessert and too cold weather in Antarctica. In addition to this, people have some health problem like Asthma, slow breathing cannot travel at these place as the lack of medical facility there.
In view of above, there are little drawbacks over the benefits. But I can say people have to travel avoid to travel such places where they feel difficulties especially in medical concern. There are other wondering places in the world where people can enjoy the travelling and explore so many other things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the fastest'.
Suggestion: of the fastest
...el at any corner of world with the help of fastest communication system. Nowadays people p...
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Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the greatest'.
Suggestion: has the greatest
...ated at South Pole of earth. The desert has greatest wildlife sanctuary and tourist can find...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, similarly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06012658228 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54328810257 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6891013609 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237010117577 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762330201121 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722512607458 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155933818859 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578392241317 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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