*** During recent plane journey you set next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurant. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurant.
Write a letter to this businessman in your letter,
- Remind him when and where you meet.
- Tell him what kind of job you are interested in.
- Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Robin
I would like to remind you the recent plane journey of Dubai where we met each other on board. We spent almost five hours of quality times together.
I have explained you about my future plan that I am going to settled in Canada in next few months. You might aware about my qualification which I have recently completed in Hotel management. You offered me business card and suggested me to work in one of your restaurant across the state of Ontario, Canada.
Therefore, I believe that it is quite benefit for me to fit in your restaurant as I am having degree in hotel management. Though, it would be quite difficult for me to have a job in new city. Hence, it would be grateful for me if you could give me a good position in your restaurant. I am waiting for positive reply from your side.
Thank you
Yours Faithfully
Avani Chauhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'settle'
Suggestion: settle
...about my future plan that I am going to settled in Canada in next few months. You might...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'benefited', 'benefitted'.
Suggestion: benefited; benefitted
... Therefore, I believe that it is quite benefit for me to fit in your restaurant as I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, therefore, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52229299363 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51754362095 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9105714739 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198956245618 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812108468878 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528015789268 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122004282061 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458093266861 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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