An English-speaking friend has written to ask you for help in arranging accommodation in your town /city when they visit next month. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter.
• Give details of some accommodation you think is suitable for him/her
• Suggest what your friend should bring with them
• Recommend some places for him/her to visit on the trip
Dear Sam,
Hope you are in good spirit and radiant health. Yesterday, I read your e-mail and I can’t explain how happy I am with your planned visit in my tow which you are going schedule next month.
As requested, I did search on google and found tow motels that are suitable for you and your family. One of them is close to house with the name of AVRS Motel. They charge $100/night. Another one is situated in Central market of New Jersey, named Justin Motel. It will cost you around $125/night including breakfast.
I would like to request you to purchase an Apple iwatch series 6 for me. You can make the payment from your credit card and share the total cost so that I can pay that into your account. Don’t forget to ask for international warranty for the iwatch.
To make your trip more enjoyable, I would highly recommend you to have your dinner in one of the Indian restaurant, which recently got opened in outer market of New Jersey. I will personally take you there.
I am looking forward to see you.
Yours Lovingly
Rohith Sharrma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-12-08 | sakshi2424 | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-21 | Rohith | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...international warranty for the iwatch. To make your trip more enjoyable, I woul...
^^^^
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...take you there. I am looking forward to see you. Yours Lovingly Rohith Sharrm...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61578947368 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28377997397 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5132032312 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6428571429 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250734819206 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823438957409 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508789076337 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130878380467 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449128128053 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.