A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
– explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house
– tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
– say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear john,
Hope you are doing well when you received my letter. I got your message that you are coming to my place next week. I am really excited about it, I can be with you whole week but unfortunately the day you will arrived I won't be there to pick you up as I have some important work in morning on that specific day.
As I will be away from home I already made arrangement for you to get the key. you can ask my neighbour for keys, I will give it to them for you so that you can wait inside before I will be back at home. I know its your first time in Vancouver by I can tell you how to be at my home in two-step. Either you can take a taxi to the address that you already know from airport or you can catch the northbound rail line which will departure from airport to my home. my house is just 6 stops away from airport.
As soon as I will be there we will go to waterfront which is just 10 min drive and can spend our quality of time together at ocean view café . Then after, If we still have some left we will go to nearby beach or might be at nearby shopping complex, as i know that you love to do window shopping.
I am really eager to see you after 5 years. I already took a week off from work just to be with you.
your friend
Manveer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'arrive'
Suggestion: arrive
...week but unfortunately the day you will arrived I wont be there to pick you up as I hav...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ade arrangement for you to get the key. you can ask my neighbour for keys, I will g...
^^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e before I will be back at home. I know its your first time in Vancouver by I can t...
^^^
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...axi to the address that you already know from airport or you can catch the northb...
^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...will departure from airport to my home. my house is just 6 stops away from airport...
^^
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lity of time together at ocean view café . Then after, I we still have some left w...
^^
Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...might be at nearby shopping complex, as i know that you love to do window shoppin...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...k off from work just to be with you. your friend Manveer
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 3.87159533074 4.54256449028 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05629926924 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0201372024 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5384615385 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397769610632 0.216113520407 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163056521385 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093202609081 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239644538279 0.12726935374 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979022117267 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 70.7449484536 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.17 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.75 7.59969072165 76% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.