Hi Kamila,
I learnt that you are considering buying a house West Street, Mumbai. It is my concern and I would strongly recommend not buy any house in that area where I am living now. Despite the fact that the proximity to hospital, school , supermarket and commercial center from my house which are main decision driven factors when I was decided to purchase the house, there other issues have not been assessed properly. It was big mistake and I deeply regretting now because already existing crime are in rise. Last week my aunt was attacked by chain snappers and she is now being treated in the hospital for neck injuries.
Due to this reason, I already planning to leave this place and now considering buying a house in Northwest street Mumbai where my cousin already living. Although any commercial centers and cinemas are located far from the place, three are plenty of public transports to many part of the city and even Seatle metro station is in walk able distance. So I suggest you consider that place for buying a house. If you wish, you can join me tomorrow at 10.00 am nearby seatle metro station as I am already scheduled a few visits with the real estate broker for the rest of morning time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t that the proximity to hospital, school , supermarket and commercial center from ...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cial center from my house which are main decision driven factors when I was decid...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...where my cousin already living. Although any commercial centers and cinemas are l...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
...hree are plenty of public transports to many part of the city and even Seatle metro stati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63255813953 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38096230157 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8311338773 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129981237204 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585042491028 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372547546098 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101518882164 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00769952474031 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.