A friend is expecting you to stay with him in two weeks time, but unfortunately you forgot that you have a business trip at the same time.
Write letter to friend
-apologise and say that you cannot come to visit
-explain why you will not able to visit
-suggest another time that you could visit
Dear john
Hi! How are you? I am fine and I hope you are also sailing on the same boat. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to feel sorry to you for unable to coming at your home to stay with you.
To be honest, I have been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I know that you are waiting for me to come at your home. I feel very sorry for not coming, indeed, I also want to meet with you but because of some reasons I am unable to visit you.
The reason for not coming at your home is my business trip which will also held on the same week in which I promised you to meet you. Indeed, this trip is very important for my career as it gives the uplift to my professional career. As, I am a software engineer and This trip give me the chance to enhance my knowledge. Therefore, I am unable to come at your home to meet with you.
In addition, I will definitely meet you after coming back from that trip as I will free for the next 10 days. So, it give us the opportunity to spend some quality time with each other without any interruption.
Pay my regards to your parents and wish you a good luck.
Yours truly
Shiwani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john Hi! How are you? I am fine and I hope yo...
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Line 11, column 118, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
... will free for the next 10 days. So, it give us the opportunity to spend some qualit...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09130434783 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1166769619 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7257849639 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2142857143 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372067926862 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146896387699 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901507675065 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23126264504 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786291032709 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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