A friend has asked you to babysit on Saturday and wants to know how much you
charge per hour for this. Unfortunately, you already have a commitment this
weekend and cannot help. However, you free the following weekend.
Write a letter to your friend exlaining that you are not able to help this time, but
could help later. Explain also what your fee for the service is.
Y o u should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You do not need to write your own address.
Thank you for asking me to babysit for you. As you know I enjoy looking after
Anthony and would be happy to help you out. However, this weekend I have a
commitment which I cannot break.
My parents are coming to visit and I am going to take them down to the coast as I have
always promised to do. They are getting older so I like to spend as much time with them
as possible. Also, it is my father's birthday and I want to celebrate with them. I am
really sorry that I am not able to help this time, but I am free next weekend and I would be glad to babysit for you
then, if you should choose to go out for the evening.
My charge is fifteen dollars per hour until midnight and twenty dollars per hour after that.
You would need to give me any special instructions you might have and, of course,
leave a phone number in case of emergency.
Yours sincerely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, then, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28402366864 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13977129543 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7554465959 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363805402693 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133363977215 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996209050957 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121359133727 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10321069066 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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