A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
• Give details of what you know about his company
• Explain your current situation
• Give your answer to the offer and explain why
Dear Goldy,
Hey! How are you? Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter in response to the offer sent by you.
Last time, when we met in Chandigarh I told you that, I have been working as a senior filling officer in WWICS one of the most reputed agencies of the immigration field and you told me about your immigration company which started six years ago.
I was very excited while saying that it will just fun working together but I never thought that you will take that so seriously and offer me a position at your office.
I feel jubilant about learning about your reputation in the field of immigration even though, I cannot join your company immediately. As per my contract with my company, it will complete after three months hence, I would not be able to work with you for a few months. I have to drop a resignation letter to my human resource manager, in order, to let them know that, I will not be able to continue after completion of the contract and new renewal is required.
I will be able to accept your offer only after my resign acceptance because I cannot commit you in advance about joining your company. In case, if you can hold the position for some time, till my resign is accepted by the management then I will be able to work with you. But if you want someone right now for work, I can ask my junior, she has recently dropped her job and she has enough knowledge about the filling.
Thank you for such an exciting offer simultaneously sorry for not accepting the same. Write me back and let me know your decision.
Regards,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47079037801 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37766916538 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6959601777 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.076923077 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354634674531 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127326445216 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587621663999 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190195131206 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299038787547 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.