A friend has written to you asking for your advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter; tell your friend you understand the problem, expl

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A friend has written to you asking for your advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter; tell your friend you understand the problem, explain what happened to you in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem

Dear Suraj

I hope you are doing well! This letter is in response to the problem which you mentioned in your last communication, a week ago. I can totally understand your problem and I would suggest a solution to this issue as well.

I have not informed to you earlier that I too faced similar kind of harassment last year with my earlier company HR. This is why I can actually be in your shoe and feel the situation. The HR tried to molest me after understanding that I stay alone and tried to take advantage of it. He started visiting me often at home and that too at odd times. I started feeling very comfortable and after hearing this for a week or so, I reported this to the HR head keeping my manager in loop. He was absconded from the job since then.

My suggestion to you would be first be emotionally and mentally strong and take the necessary step first by confronting to your superior on his face that you aren't comfortable and still is the same situation persists, tell your manager and if required get in touch with HR. Trust me, this is the only way you can rescue yourself and be at peace. It's good to move and start the path again to get relaxed in life.

I hope my advice would be helpful to you and do revert to me about what steps you took to overcome this problem.

Yours lovingly,
Urvi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...required get in touch with HR. Trust me, this is the only way you can rescue your...
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Suggestion:
...ercome this problem. Yours lovingly, Urvi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, still, then, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34677419355 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42342399736 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4577215472 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296922383368 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102573631722 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811861574396 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196776514119 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678917283166 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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