A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask for your help in finding a job in your country, you have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/her
tell you friend about a job and what sort of work it involves
say why you think the job would be suitable for him
explain how to apply for a job
Dear Rajesh,
I hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter to tell you about the job that suits your profile.
As per our last discussion, I found a job in software development in Bangalore, India as requested by you. One of my friends looking for a senior java coder for his company, also they are ready to offer work permit visa for three years. You must lead a team of five members and will be the first point of contact for project release.
Always from graduation, you look for challenging and interesting areas to work. This job will fulfill your expectations plus management team is open for any suggestions, improvements and there is a lot of liberty to define new process and implement new tools in the project.
I am going to send the company details and careers links to apply for this job in a separate mail. Keep your resume in pdf format and need to upload experience and education certificates for initial screening for the interview process.
Looking for forward to hearing you soon.
Yours Friend,
Sreenivasan.M
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| 2019-11-04 | Narges.s | 78 | view |
| 2019-08-02 | Sreenivasan Murugappan | 78 | view |
| 2019-05-27 | sudheerssmg | 81 | view |
| 2019-01-15 | nivikasha | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... point of contact for project release. Always from graduation, you look for challengi...
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...g you soon. Yours Friend, Sreenivasan.M
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74725274725 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66734333081 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2345001078 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389680349814 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154163421434 0.0766984524023 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050980360824 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211464037752 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527905236985 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.