A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask for your help in finding a job in your country, you have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/hertell you friend about a job and what sort of work it involves

Dear Jamila
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to let you know that a company in our country is recruiting for a vacancy as your desired one.

One on the companies locating in development center of Tehran university is hiring a research and development professional in the field of chemistry to be in charge of a science based project they have recently started. The job description includes mostly laboratory skills.

As I remember you were keen on safety sector, and the project involves such stuff as well, towards producing an anti-foam material. Therefore, I thought it might be of interest to you. It also supports your eagerness on laboratory work, which you were enjoying so much at the university.

This job’s advertisement is available at university website, which I will attach it’s link to this email. It is mentioned in the ad that they would arrange a virtual interview to find potent applicants at first, so do not worry about being abroad.

I hope it would work and you can finally find your dream job.
Best wishes
Nancy

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, therefore, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79999913744 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1879191196 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342162922596 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119063266997 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793994534145 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184638810576 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861666240794 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.