A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Sam,
Hope this finds you well. You mentioned in your previous letter that you were looking for a job here and I have found an opportunity that might suit you. Also, the tentative joining date is specified as next month, so I hope it would be convenient for you.
The vacancy is at a newly opened pharmaceutical company in my town and they are looking for a sales professional who has accounting knowledge as well. Moreover, the position requires you to travel to their other branch which is also in the same city once a week. As your communication and interpersonal skills are strong, I think the sales position would be suitable for you. Also, as you recently completed your master’s in business administration, the accounting tasks would be smooth sailing for you.
You need to apply for this position through their official website www.pharmacorp.com. While, applying make sure you upload your resume and a photograph along with other details. I hope that you have received a clear picture about the job, but if you need any more help or information please let me know.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Suraj
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91282051282 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88442278559 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0151564127 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461873178558 0.216113520407 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169447158648 0.0766984524023 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112175507681 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281929333161 0.12726935374 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110093591579 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.