A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear rose,
Hope you are doing well. Last month you have sent me a letter where you have mentioned that you want to change your job and move to my country so, here I have an opportunity for you.
First of all, I have heard agency of sales manager in Lotus company which deals in cosmetic products. It involves team handling and achievement of Target within deadline. As, you were previously in Telecom sector and have some experience of sales so I would recommend you to apply for this.
In addition to this, you can apply in two ways. Firstly, go to their website and upload your resume. Secondly, you can send your resume through post. I sharing one of my friends number who is working in same organization 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 who will help you more.
Hoping to meet you soon
Yours lovingly
Gray
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear rose, Hope you are doing well. Last month you ...
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Line 13, column 151, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... you can send your resume through post. I sharing one of my friends number who is...
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Line 17, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you more. Hoping to meet you soon Yours lovingly Gray
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng to meet you soon Yours lovingly Gray
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44078947368 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37917878474 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730263157895 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9379756972 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44620575444 0.216113520407 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153230985978 0.0766984524023 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100388873092 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24476079462 0.12726935374 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897975287561 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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