The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010
The given graph compares 4 different countries Brazil, Colombia, Indonesia and Vietnam in terms of the amount of coffee produced through the period of 1990 to 2010.
Roughly speaking, there has been a upward trend in the amount of coffee production, except for Colombia experiencing the opposite trend. In addition, of the 4 countries, Brazil witnessed the most remarkable growth over the period shown.
In 1990, the percentage of coffee production in Indonesia accounted for 0.2 million tonnes, which was two times greater than that of Vietnam, 0.1 million tonnes. Moreover, these figures experienced a slight rise and reached a peak at 0.4 and 0.3 million tonnes respectively in the year 2010.
Colombia was the only country to undergo a downward trend through the period. In 1990, the amount of coffee production made up 0.5 miliion tonnes, followed by a steady decline and hit the lowest point of 0.3 million tonnes in 2010. In contrast, the figure for Brazil witnessed a significant increase reaching a peak at 1.9 million tonnes in the last year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, except for, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08045977011 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67146813079 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.5076744053 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203858590562 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880301054156 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922468100055 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140167682109 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924314294641 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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