The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart above presents statistics on the average Saturday sales of eight products, including cakes, cookies, rolls, fresh loaves, toasted sandwiches, salads, crisps and doughnuts made by two bakeries located in London in 2010. The graph compares Bernie's Buns and Lovely Loaves based on the number of each listed product sold and in the graph, Lovely Loaves is represented by red and Bernie's Buns is represented by blue.
Overall, Bernie's Buns is generally busier than Lovely Loaves with six out of eight products surpassing the other bakery in sales. Another interesting point to mention is that, based on the chart, sweet treats such as cookies and doughnuts are more preferable than saviour ones like sandwiches and salads.
Looking at the details, in Bernie's Buns, doughnuts hold the highest spot in sales with just under 140 sold, while the second-best selling item is cookies with under 120 purchased. Salads are ranked last in sales with only nearly 20 bought.
Similar to Bernie's Bun, the number-one selling product at Lovely Loaves is also doughnuts with approximately 120 vended on average. This is followed by cakes with over 100 cakes purchased. Last on the list is toasted sandwiches with only about 20 sold. In terms of selling cookies, Lovely Loaves' sales figures are nowhere near as much as Bernie's Buns' with their cookies being sold twice as many as Lovely Loaves'. On the other hand, Lovely Loaves' salads were purchased around three times more than Bernie's Buns'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, second, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08979591837 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35901418782 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7051238812 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.363636364 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797376029558 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330170877028 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473982302139 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558156223742 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543642386669 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.