Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.
With the rapid development of today's world, living standard all around the globe have raised considerably and people's lives are more convenient than ever before. However, unfortunately, the rates of crimes and society's vices are at their peak. To tackle this problem, a lot of people assume that prison would be the best punishment for criminals. In my point of view, prison is certainly not the most suitable punishment for criminals and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.
First of all, life in prison these days seem to be far away from being a deterrent against crime. For example, many prisoners have access to luxuries such as televisions, computers and sport facilities or even personal chefs to cook their meals. Being sentenced to prison today is probably not different from that to a holiday camp. As a matter of fact, to become a mean of punishment, I believe life in prisons need to be tougher.
Another reason why I believe that prison is not the most suitable punishment for criminals is that the culture in prison is undeniably compatible with that in the part of society which authorities tried to pull inmates away from. Take shoplifter or pickpocketer as an example. These types of criminal are often throw in the same cells and rubbing shoulders with murderers or rapists. This is not only useless for their rehabilitation process, but also make it more possible for them to recommit crimes when they are released because there is a high chance that petty criminals learned tricks from their dangerous cell mates.
In contrast, many people argue that in prisons, prisoners are offered courses in psychology and business or chances to learn new skills such as meditation and yoga, which can be helpful once they are back in society.
In conclusion, prison, which has its own benefits and drawbacks, is still currently the most well-known punishment for criminals. Personally, I doubt that it is the best due to its fulfilling living condition and lack of categorization. I believe more suitable punishment and treatment can be put out to support criminals' rehabilitation process and cope with rising crime rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00278551532 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77416629538 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573816155989 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.462141907 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344676883609 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985400997366 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902596359192 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186649958157 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853315896749 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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