How to make a good first impression on your crush

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How to make a good first impression on your crush

The following are ways to make a good impression on your crush during meetings. Firstly, you have to keep yourself clean and tidy before meeting your crush. For example, you can choose appropriate clothing, make yourself comfortable and beautiful. Always keep the hair fragrant and neat, not messy. Secondly, you and your crush will already have some things in common to talk about. Use small talk to share interests in sports, subjects, and future orientation. If your relationship develops, you can hang out at your crush’s favorite place. Finally, be prepared for the next time you see your crush. For instance, make a plan about what you want to say or do in order to make a good impression. Talk a lot of fun so that they feel more comfortable around you. Therefore, Be confident and comfortable yourself and don’t make too small mistakes to make a good impression on Crush.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...your crush. For example, you can choose appropriate clothing, make yourself comfortable and...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es to make a good impression on Crush.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88079470199 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66544568045 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635761589404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.9963265306 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357384090381 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144416973484 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136689399138 0.0603063233224 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357384090381 0.12726935374 281% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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