An item of clothing you purchased but found some issues with it once you returned home. Describe
• what the item was
• what were the issues
• what you expect the store manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the product I purchased on the 15th of this month from one of your famous local branches.
The product is a three-piece Armani suit which is black in colour except for the shirt which is white in colour. The shirt is of medium-sized and the pant size is thirty-four and the blazer consists of Armani logo on it with yellow coloured thread.
Let me explain my problem in detail. As I was in an emergency I hurried away from your store with having a good look at the item I bought, but when I returned home I found a lot of issues with the suit. Firstly, some joints are not properly stitched and it is in a position of tearing if I wear it more than twice or thrice. Secondly, the colour of the pant is completely different from that of suit which I did not notice due to the lighting effect in your shop.
I would like to request you to change all parts of the clothing I purchased at your store or I can also feel happy if you provide me a complete refund.
Awaiting for your soon response.
Raj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...t is a three-piece Armani suit which is black in colour except for the shirt which is white in ...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...in colour except for the shirt which is white in colour. The shirt is of medium-sized and the p...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...y if you provide me a complete refund. Awaiting for your soon response. Raj
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29126213592 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49049470204 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.634185 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159191420979 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518660507162 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832222297293 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699034121635 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741835117964 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.