Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
thank them for the photos and for the holiday
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Dear jhavi and Bhavi
Thanks for the pictures that you sent us. We have already framed the one where we all are standing at the pool. Honestly, It was the most fun I have had in ages.
However, when I opened your letter I felt guilty for not responding to you earlier. There were torrential rains in our area and most of the town was flooded. I was horrified to find my apartment submerged in water. We had to wait till the water had receided and everything to come back to normal. Even though we lost alot of our furniture, there was not much damage beyond that.
We would love to have you visit us here. There is a train ride to North Ireland and the view is mesmerising, also a little quaint town of Sicily is a pizza lovers heaven that we all can visit. Moreover, we can stay at Gales's parents castle for few days.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Lots of love.
King
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, honestly, however, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3630952381 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17240703467 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0790174466 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.3846153846 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9230769231 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181956356518 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661158471329 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816111013303 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922816574992 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535744916621 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.