Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents an

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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.

Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear Sir,

I am writing in regard to my bag that I left in the plane of your airline. It was a flight to London which took place last week on the 10th of May on Sunday.

I regret to tell you that I recalled about the bag only when I reached my hotel. Consequently, I would like to ask you to find out if the bag has been found.

It is made of black leather, has a rectangular form and there are two hands. It is locked with a zipper on the top of it. Moreover, the bag does not have any logo or other distinctive things. There are four books, two pens, one magazine five hundred dollars and my driving license in it.

I would like you to call me back as soon as you receive this mail. My mobile telephone number is +380977894512.

I await for your prompt response.

Your faithfully,
Sobchenko Volodymyr

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, moreover, so, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28846153846 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42997762454 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0836791118 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.75 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349115466734 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959578558014 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941292669714 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160000742275 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107644887966 0.0580467560999 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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